4: MIREILLE
The rains began while Mireille slept. The heavens opened and enveloped all of Paris in a quick but violent storm.
Mireille woke with a start as a terrific blast of thunder shook the room. A window flew open, banging hard against the frame. The dark sky beyond showed that the easy afternoon spent with Kirika had turned into a stormy
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I like the italicised thought portions too. And the delicate touch with their interplay. And how Mireille and Kirika could never have an easy ride of it. *g*
Thanks for writing Noir!
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By the way - don't you think they should take care about the "movie" producers before they actually make that American-something they called Noir? I really wished they could.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Ugh if you're talking about that movie or TV series that's supposed to be based on Noir but doesn't sound anything like it, it sounds awful. I hope they don't push through with it. :P
Thanks again!
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Anyway I hope they won't make it at all, that would be the best option :P
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