Mentalist Fanfic: Yet (2/2)

[watchyouwalk]

Title: Yet

Rating: T

Warnings: Violence and subtle sexual situations

Disclaimer: I definitely do not own The Mentalist. I'm quite satisfied with the job Bruno Heller is doing this season, so I wouldn't want to anyway.

Summary: "Yet... if he is truly concerned, why doesn't he just tell her? Explain away her fears? Soothe her worries out of existence

Comments

[sirenofodysseus]

What a wonderful, and absolutely beautiful way to end an already amazing piece. I'm also thrilled that you used the word "awezing", haha, because I'm still hoping it'll catch on one day... :D

Awww, poor Jane though--seriously, I wanted to smack him during certain parts of this piece, but I think in the end, he redeemed himself to Lisbon. :P

I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve, my friend. :)

[watchyouwalk]

Thank you kindly, m'dear. :)

Oh, it will most definitely catch on... eventually. :P

Hm, I do think he deserves to be smacked at least once, at least from an outside perspective. It's a little hard to still think so when you're reading his thoughts and realize that he basically can't help it. Quite the dilemma our poor Jane got himself stuck in. /shakes head

Hopefully you won't have to wait too much longer. :D /hugs

[sirenofodysseus]

I have to agree with you there, but I believe Lisbon takes care of most of the smacking for us. :) (plus, you also used 'THE END', which is epically awesome. I give you sooo many hugs for that one.)

Hopefully I won't. :D *hugs back*

[watchyouwalk]

Oh yes, THE END was a must. As you well know, I firmly believe every story should end in such a way. It's just so fitting. ;D