My Heart Is Beating

[waterbeauty]

I'm not the greatest poet, but I do my best. It isn't anything like writing, where you have to read in-between the lines to see what is actually going on. In poetry, you have to read the poem over and over and analyze each line or stanza to figure out the meaning. Truly, it is a difficult form of writing, and you should be accomplished in spelling

Comments

wow

[dntcloseurheart]

thats amazing lee.
fo sho. whos it about? lol
and i dont think hes kidding. i talked to courtney, and she said that he IS leaving..i even talked to steven... but he does need to get his head out of his ass, and if he doesnt leave, i hope we get back together. i got his christmas present..i made it actually. its a binder with a bunch of things on it, and i wrote a bunch of lyrics inside it, and im going to do some more to it...just odnt tell! lol

Re: wow

[waterbeauty]

I don't know really. I was thinking of Allen for a bit, but we were never together, so yeah.

I just hope he is joking. I mean, he's a cool guy to hang around with, right? Don't want to lose that!

That's a sweet x-mas gift! I like that idea!

Re: wow

[dntcloseurheart]

well i still think u guys should atleast try it.
i really dont want him to go. uk how i fell tho...i think everyone does. i still feel like holding onto him and crying and begging him not to go. he still lokes at me like he did while we were dating..like his eyes still say ich liebe sie...*sighs* but a apart of me just wants him to hurry up and leave so i can get over him, but i dont want him to go
mom got mad at me cuz i dont want to do anything christmas related cuz ik that id have to admit that christmas is coming and that means its closer until he leaves... like in Christmas Fears

Re: wow

[waterbeauty]

Well, you should talk to Allen for me then. I think we should give it a try as well, but he will never like me that way. Ever.

Anywho, I think you have the right to be acting like this. When things go wrong, everyone should act the way they want to. Like me for instance, I throw huge fits whenever I get mad!

Snooze You Lose

[dntcloseurheart]

ur rite tho..
and gosh that sounds like a beer commercial..or somethinglike that lmao

Re: Snooze You Lose

[waterbeauty]

It does, doesn't it? lol Interesting. I should send that in to a beer company. That would be hilarious. Ville snoozing, and Bam walks back, sees the beer, and takes it away carefully, then walks off, drinking it. -rolls over and dying of laughter- I can picture it in my head!

Re: Snooze You Lose

[dntcloseurheart]

i could actually see that!
but what beer company to send it to?...hmmm....
BUDWEISER!
or how ever u spell it lol

Re: Snooze You Lose

[waterbeauty]

I have an uncle that works with Budweiser. That would be so awesome!