Comments | wateriswide: FIC: Changes (3/?) (Life With Derek)

wateriswide

FIC: Changes (3/?) (Life With Derek)

May 02, 2009 22:25

Title: Changes (Part 3/?)
Rating: PG-13 - R (language, suggestive situations including stepsiblings, nothing graphic)
Summary: Where "Futuritis" left off.
Disclaimer: Life With Derek sadly enough doesn't belong to me, sorry.
Author's note: SPOILERS FOR THE SERIES FINALE AND THE END OF SEASON 4 OF LIFE WITH DEREK.
I suck for not updating ( Read more... )

life with derek, fanfic

Comments 16

sugah66 May 3 2009, 04:05:18 UTC

Stopping there is, I'm sure, a form of cruel and unusual punishment. I have lots of friends who are lawyers who would probably agree with me on this, if of course I were willing to admit to them that I read fanfic. Which isn't going to happen.

Suffice to say, I highly enjoyed this chapter. I liked the double talk and the Christmas gifts, and how he didn't tell her that Truman called (quite frankly, I'm surprised Truman made the effort), but mostly I like how it ends and although I know it's highly unlikely they can make it all the way to Mexico, I still hope that's where they end up. ;)

wateriswide May 5 2009, 03:08:52 UTC

Haha, that would actually make me proud to get sued for something like that. Thank you! :)

clio21000 May 3 2009, 05:23:05 UTC

Oh! Oh, Casey, where are you going?! I'm on the edge of my seat.

Very real and believable (and enjoyable!) interaction between Derek and Casey. Great work!

wateriswide May 5 2009, 03:09:05 UTC

Thank you!!

(The comment has been removed)

wateriswide May 5 2009, 03:09:21 UTC

Aww, thank you!

youcallitwinter May 3 2009, 15:10:24 UTC

I think I forgot to mention it at ff, but your Casey!jabs are way too amazing. ("And even fewer brain cells")
And just the fact that Derek didn't tell her about Truman and EVERYTHING. Oh MAN! Seriously, awesome work!

wateriswide May 5 2009, 03:09:46 UTC

Thank you! *runs off to go read ff.net reviews*

pheobep May 3 2009, 16:39:16 UTC

I am so glad that you updated this! I love the story -- there is a nicely natural build in the emotions and the original characters are interesting. You have D&C characterization down really well too. I like the conversation about Kevin -- and that they both knew (and the readers knew) that it wasn't really Kevin that was missed or missing.

Nice job!

:) pheobe

wateriswide May 5 2009, 03:12:30 UTC

Thank you! I was a little unsure about their characterization in this chapter, so I'm glad to hear you say that :)