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ARCHIVED (five stories about michael phelps and ryan lochte)

Feb 19, 2009 15:45

Title: ARCHIVED (five stories about michael phelps and ryan lochte)
Author: britfacexx
Pairing: Michael Phelps/Ryan Lochte
Rating: Hard R
Warnings: Violence; Drug Use (which was written in December, so wayyy before Bong Gate ever happened. Still, I decided to keep it in for the sake of plot. No harm/judgment/whatever is meant by it. Promise.)
Disclaimer: I ( Read more... )

fic - mine, the olympics = my love

Comments 31

mgm86 February 20 2009, 04:02:29 UTC

Wow. I don't even know where to begin commenting on how wonderful this fic was. It brought the LOLZ and some major hotness, combined with heartbreaking angst and an undertone of everlasting love (whether it be platonic or romantic depending on how one wants to interpret it, I personally choose the latter lol).

All I can really say is amazing job!!

waterlanding February 23 2009, 02:11:29 UTC

Thank you so much! I literally made a list of everything I loved in a Phlochte fic and then wrote the story, so that probably has to do with the range of emotions/situations, haha.

ealanta February 20 2009, 04:16:18 UTC

i am speechless. this was perfect.

write more.

fucking amazing.

waterlanding February 23 2009, 02:12:23 UTC

lkjasljfds I don't know what to say! Except this comment made my life. I'm so glad you liked the fic that much!<3

ealanta February 23 2009, 18:33:27 UTC

you seriously need to write more. not necessarily a sequel. just more.
this was really really good <3

smellyleaf February 20 2009, 04:34:19 UTC

THIS WAS SO AMAZING.

I DON'T EVEN THINK I CAN GET EVERYTHING I WANT TO SAY INTO THIS ONE COMMENT BUT OMG

"It's funny how things can change so much so fast. It's like in Madden NFL when your team goes for a blitz and then out of nowhere your quarterback gets sacked and you don't know how it happened, just that you lost to some thirteen-year-old Asian kid who's never touched a girl before.

Anyway."

OMG.

I SERIOUSLY LOVE YOU. THIS WAS AWESOME.

waterlanding February 23 2009, 02:13:23 UTC

AHAHAHA YAY I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading.♥

djb_slasher February 20 2009, 06:36:27 UTC

This is actually pretty good. I love the whole five article format thing. It's a new way to write. I just might have to try that.

waterlanding February 23 2009, 02:14:08 UTC

Thanks!

Yeah, I have no idea how I came up with the concept, haha, but it seemed to work.

agape_eternal February 20 2009, 09:54:15 UTC

I LOVE this...

it's uh, you know, kinda screaming "SEQUEL!"

waterlanding February 23 2009, 02:15:21 UTC

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it. :D

it's uh, you know, kinda screaming "SEQUEL!"
rofl I don't know! I kind of dug myself a hole ending it in 2012. We'll see if I can come up with anything else... ;)

agape_eternal February 23 2009, 10:25:16 UTC

:D I did

LOL jeah, but Reezy wants to go all the way to 2016 *bats eyes*