LJIdol: Week 1: Struggle

[waveform_delta]

There's not much air in here.

That's what happens in coffin that's trapped underwater, of course. Not a lot of air. I mean, really, if you have your heart set on breathing, if having air is just your thing, there are lot better places to be than in a pine and ebony casket submerged in six feet of water, gagged, blindfolded, arms behind your back,

Comments

[lilmissmagic71]

So cool!

[rayaso]

This was great! I loved the line "if you have your heart set on breathing" - great! I enjoyed how you opened with the trick, discussed your parents, and then went back to the show with an uncertain ending. I enjoyed this.

[baxaphobia]

A fun but unsettling read! I'm clostrophobic! Yikes!

[wolfden]

I like this.

[halfshellvenus]

This was just fantastic. Nice dry humor, an interesting backstory, and then the ending in the horrible moment of where that beginning risked ending.