Comments | waveform_delta: LJIdol, Week 3: Brushback Pitch

waveform_delta

Dec 15, 2016 18:59

Batter up ( Read more... )

Comments 9

penpusher December 20 2016, 09:50:21 UTC

well played, from a brushback to a beanball.

murielle December 20 2016, 13:38:27 UTC

Love this! Not only is it a great poem, the batter gains the upper hand...even though he's flat on his back at the time.

YES!

halfshellvenus December 20 2016, 21:14:06 UTC

I loved the last line, too!

The batter paid a price for that result, but OTOH... victory for him! :)

my_name_is_jenn December 20 2016, 23:23:16 UTC

Fantastic!