Future/Past

[waveform_delta]

If future is future and past is past

Comments

[bleodswean]

Wow!!! So many deep thoughts embedded in this strong rhyme. You had me at the first stanza! If writing, not reading were to work so fast... !!!

[rayaso]

I enjoyed the rhyme scheme, and especially the line "If I uncover my future by what I leave behind". These are all good questions, well phrased.

[kajel]

I loved the rhythm of this!

[marlawentmad]

Sometimes I have a hard time with rhyming poetry, but you knocked me over the head with this one. It is so delicious to read aloud. Well done!

[halfshellvenus]

So much of our experiences help define us-- good and bad-- and if you remove them, what is left that is actually you instead of some generic human you would never recognize as yourself?