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[leigh137]

Good day all, I'm new here, thought I would make an introduction. I'm a writer and painter. I stick mainly to poetry and short stories in the writing department, and stick mainly to acrylics in a surrealist style in painting

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[roma_ann]

ooh. nice. It's a total incantation.

If I may: something to tie "bite" to "mist", just because the senses are incongruous-- but unique effect, which I like! Such as,,, Each _____ bite uneaten or, Each bite of_________ uneaten... something that repeats sound of 'these' and 'missed'... wisp of a bite