Comments | waynemanor: Another 55 word story

waynemanor

Another 55 word story

Nov 15, 2006 15:47

New Micro Fiction. 55 word limit, written in about 20 minutes. Anyone like it ( Read more... )

Comments 9

dro November 15 2006, 21:12:27 UTC

why'd you change your post?

waynemanor November 15 2006, 21:16:16 UTC

If you mean you viewed it in the 30 seconds between the original and edited post then I am very impressed with the timing of the universe.

I changed it because the original had too much useless information and detracted from the story, which isn't a huge deal but whatever.

Also, I think my phone is back on.

ugly_or_pretty November 15 2006, 22:19:33 UTC

i like it!

bahzerkerjosh November 15 2006, 22:20:50 UTC

needs more character development

waynemanor November 16 2006, 05:04:16 UTC

hahaha

branbran November 15 2006, 23:20:03 UTC

i think it's perfect.

but i might suggest taking a word out and adding the word "froofy" in there somewhere.

contemplatyrday November 16 2006, 03:19:01 UTC

Bathroom Stall In A Christian School Narrative.
By: Jacki Arnold

"JESUS COMES"

scratched impiously underneath, "On your mom's FACE."

Based on a true story.

waynemanor November 16 2006, 16:00:47 UTC

the best ones always are.