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karadin December 21 2012, 15:32:34 UTC
a very good fic, but I was thrown off by the rating, there was not enough explicit to rate an NC-17, you could leave warnings, but state it's only implied and give a mature rating, then more people would possibly read and enjoy the story.

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weareallpuppets December 22 2012, 16:39:57 UTC
Thank you so much! About the rating, I had trouble deciding on the rating myself, and the NC-17 is more for the extra scene which... I haven't gotten the chance to upload yet as yesterday and the day before were just too crazy. Thanks for the advice! I think I shall bump it down.

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firesign10 December 22 2012, 02:27:07 UTC
Very interesting, intriguing story!

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weareallpuppets December 22 2012, 16:40:15 UTC
Thank you!

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terrorinyertub December 24 2012, 12:04:28 UTC
My gods, this is like perfect! With all the angst and guilt and just everything. And the ending. Chuck finally coming in a bit to fix things. I love Dean with the whole I'm the Micheal's Sword! Gah! Sorry this is just a great story and its like 4am here so I needz sleep. Great job!!

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sailoreyes67 January 29 2013, 14:06:16 UTC
aaaaaakhsklahskjaghjlgskuge kyuvaaaaaaaaa *screams with endless amounts of love for this* Oh my god. I feel like I just got everything I ever wanted--- all while getting thoroughly mindfucked and just, I love every, EVERYthing about this. Oh my god. *faints*

“I’m sorry,” gasps a voice. The water cringes away from his heart, screeching.

“Who are you?” he asks (dusted freckles, dusted hair, dusted pink lips).

“I’m sorry,” it repeats. Strength finds him. The water tries to cling on, but soon he's outstripping it, though sneaky tendrils grasp and shriek desperately for his return. He feels pieces slipping back into place (overlong hair, sad eyes, dimples you could sink into).

<333

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