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[weaselsdontfly]

I know I'm almost never on here anymore, but I wrote something that I need feedback on, and I can't think of anywhere else to ask where they would actually understand how important this is to me

Comments

[snogged]

The emotion and anguish in this is palpable.
I think you should pursue a book, especially if Sarah Fimm keeps inspiring you.

Love you, sweetie.

I hope for the chance to serenade with you the "Immigrant Song" sometime soon.

[mandysimo]

This is really good. You should keep writing. This little snippet here has so much imagery and heart that it's impossible not to feel something.

[random_birth]

This is really well written. The words flow nicely and it does paint the feelings/experiences vividly.
It makes me want to read more.

[anonymous]

this is so beautiful. you are so beautiful. you are a writer. ooxoxoxoxoxo lyn

[ketene]

omg Casey you're a jerk this made me cry.

It's beautiful though, you are so talented. I hope it felt good to write and I hope you write more, it's amazing and I would be so excited to see what else you can do.