The Lone Surfer of Montana, Kansas [PG] Dean, Sam - Gen

Aug 18, 2008 18:48

Title: The Lone Surfer of Montana, Kansas
Rating: PG, for occasional swearing.
Synopsis: How would you react if you saw a kid surfing in a cornfield? Sam's level head is...well, less so. Dean recognizes familiar characteristics in the surfer.
Word count: 2,523
Spoilers: None.
Author's note: The characters Kyle and Roger originally appeared in the ( Read more... )

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just_ruth August 19 2008, 00:00:54 UTC
Who says Sam can't save everyone? I never read the original story, but I like the way the characters come together.

Thank you.

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weather_fan August 20 2008, 00:14:02 UTC
You're most certainly welcome. You needn't have read the story to get this one. All the backstory you would need to understand Kyle comes in the expository dialogue.

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just_ruth August 20 2008, 00:18:29 UTC
It's a great story and I'm glad you wrote it. :)

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dairwendan August 19 2008, 04:13:32 UTC
That is great! I love Dean's reading on Sam and Kyle! Excellent ending!

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weather_fan August 20 2008, 00:14:25 UTC
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it.

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coell August 19 2008, 08:55:22 UTC
Good story!

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weather_fan August 20 2008, 00:14:47 UTC
Hey, thanks for reading!

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tabaqui August 19 2008, 16:49:34 UTC
Ah, nice. Bittersweet but with a good, solid, hopeful ending. Lovely stuff.
:)

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weather_fan August 20 2008, 00:16:18 UTC
Very cool. Thanks for checking it out.

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weather_fan August 24 2008, 23:44:44 UTC
I'm really stoked you liked it. I thought of the action and movement before I really knew how to describe it verbally. This was a compromise that didn't sound stilted, but still got the point across.

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