Harry Potter fic - Chapter Five

Mar 02, 2006 00:20

Chapter Five of the Lucius fic. Warnings for mild violence and language in this part.

Chapter Five )

left hand path, lucius, harry potter

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isil_elensar March 2 2006, 01:50:05 UTC
Hot diggety dog!! I'm gonna print this out and read it as soon as I can!!

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space_weavil March 7 2006, 04:04:39 UTC
Much squeeing! I'm pretty happy with this so far, but I'm so keen to hear what people think

xxx
SW

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inkspotsbyisil March 7 2006, 05:54:18 UTC
I'll try and get a review to you soonish. I'm being tackled by romance novels and they won't take 'no' for an answer... ;-)

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isil_elensar March 19 2006, 06:26:39 UTC
Excellent chapter, SW!! You know, this feels somewhat like it took place in the 20's-40s.. with the likes of Al Capone and that sort. Gangsters in dark suits and fedoras totin' machine guns (billy guns?) and smoking cigarettes and cigars.

You've also got me wondering about Barbason now. Is he a good guy or a bad guy...? Or perhaps he's a good guy playing a bad guy to infiltrate the Voldemort inner sanctum just like Donnie Brasco did (only not Voldemort... lol!) Oh! And Flint and the thugs offering 'protection' to the muggle theater owner and Goyle keeping it on the down low with the Ministry... classic!

I'd absolutely love to see what happens next, SW! Give us more Malfoy... maybe more Lucius younger, then again with Draco...

Excellently written, and loaded with suspense. Chapter 6 soon, yes?? *puppy dog eyes*

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space_weavil March 20 2006, 01:10:16 UTC
Excellent chapter, SW!! You know, this feels somewhat like it took place in the 20's-40s.. with the likes of Al Capone and that sort. Gangsters in dark suits and fedoras totin' machine guns (billy guns?) and smoking cigarettes and cigars.

Thanks. That's interesting...what was kind of in my mind certainly with Flint and co was something like the Krays in London in the 1960s, that sort of East End gangster.

I'd absolutely love to see what happens next, SW! Give us more Malfoy... maybe more Lucius younger, then again with Draco... Chapter 6 is kind of started, but I need to figure where I was again, having left it over the holiday. It's back again to Lucius and Crabbe for a while. Once the term starts as well, it's kind of Lucius's show, heh. I dunno though, I'm kind of swept up in the idea of converting it to an original fic at the moment, as it's turning into something totally different and looks like fun. But I'm trying to get back into the way of fanfic again. It was actually quite nice not worrying about reviews or anything ( ... )

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isil_elensar March 21 2006, 04:34:50 UTC
Oh! I forgot to mention it but... when I read 'Corpus Christi' I kept think of Corpus Christi, Texas. LOL! I've never been there, but I've heard it's nice. (I used to live in Texas, but Corpus Christi was days away from where I lived.)

Though I'd let you know... ;-)

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space_weavil March 21 2006, 04:39:08 UTC
Lol. I actually just picked a street kind of at random in Cambridge and then looked around to see what the nearest colleges were, hehe. Five minute research. lol

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