You'll hate me for this--but here I come with a CRITIQUE!
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Actually, there's nothing wrong with the picture. I say critique because I think you can still improve on drawing side profiles. Especially on the proportion of the eyes. Also, after reading tokene's comment, I think that gash would look more realistic on a more meaty area of his body? It looks like a really deep wound and it just makes me wonder for some reason is all c:
But that aside, you are is, as always, wonderful c: The coloring is clean with this grungy feel, and the detail is something to be appreciated c:
OMG WHY?! I HATE YOU FOREVER NAO!1! D:< haha, you know I'm just kidding. XD
Hmm. I agree with you that he does look off, now that I examine him more closely. I think his eye needs to be dragged just a little to the left. I hope I can fix that, 'cause I flattened the file. >.>
And as for his wound...even though I did mean for it to look deeper than it actually is, I can see what you mean. I have this habit where I get so into drawing the picture that I forget about curtain muscular aspects of the human body. Ugh! I want to fix it but I'm afraid to. >__<;;;
Oh, thank you very much! <333 And thanks for the critique! I think I need more of those. :D
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But I love that gash on his cheek.
... That didn't come out right.
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Nah. That sounded right to me. XD
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Hey it's me!! *waves* 8D(eh...i kinda forgot or didn't know that you had a new dA accout?) XD
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Oh, hey girl! *waves back* (Yup, I do~ it's still pretty new though.) XD
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Actually, there's nothing wrong with the picture. I say critique because I think you can still improve on drawing side profiles. Especially on the proportion of the eyes. Also, after reading tokene's comment, I think that gash would look more realistic on a more meaty area of his body? It looks like a really deep wound and it just makes me wonder for some reason is all c:
But that aside, you are is, as always, wonderful c: The coloring is clean with this grungy feel, and the detail is something to be appreciated c:
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Hmm. I agree with you that he does look off, now that I examine him more closely. I think his eye needs to be dragged just a little to the left. I hope I can fix that, 'cause I flattened the file. >.>
And as for his wound...even though I did mean for it to look deeper than it actually is, I can see what you mean. I have this habit where I get so into drawing the picture that I forget about curtain muscular aspects of the human body. Ugh! I want to fix it but I'm afraid to. >__<;;;
Oh, thank you very much! <333
And thanks for the critique! I think I need more of those. :D
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I'm glad I can help c:
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Very good picture but HOLY ROMAN EMPIREEEEEEEE /sobs
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Aw, thank you~! <333
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