Novel

[webmonkeyjr]

I haven't had a chance to put this up yet, but As promised, here are the first two chapters. I'm 3/4 done Chapter five and am not even sure where my characters are taking me.

http://www.wickedjava.com/ke1/Invocation-book1.pdf">Click here for Chapters 1 & 2

If you can, really keep up with the blog and comment often. I want to use this to show

Comments

[ceosanna]

When I have the chance, I'll take a peek at this version to see how far it's come since the last time I read through it, and I'll let you know what I think.

[webmonkeyjr]

you have gotten to read this part...I'm sending you over the rest later. ;)

[ceosanna]

I already noticed a few things, so I'm doing a re-check so to speak. No biggie.

EDIT: You'll have revisions and suggestions in your inbox as soon as gmail decides to work for me.

[nytewatchyr]

Got some ideas on some of the phrasing... just little things but I was writing on the printout...