drabble. hetalia: when days crawl slow (uk/us)

Jul 20, 2010 14:28

AAAAAH I MANAGED IT. IT'S 100 WORDS EXACTLY. /CELEBRATION

Siken, look what you made me write.

Summary: This is how Arthur copes. UKUS implied.

When Days Crawl Slow

Imagine
my legs crossed, my hair combed, the shine of my boots
in the slatted light.
"snow and dirty rain" - Richard Siken

- Between visits, Arthur misses Alfred with the kind of ( Read more... )

hetalia, !fic, usuk

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mindlessyouths July 20 2010, 18:34:17 UTC
s-sob <3
I love it

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webreathewords July 20 2010, 18:35:25 UTC
:D

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pyro_o July 21 2010, 05:47:26 UTC
LOL YOU ARE STRONGER THAN I, FOR YOU HAVE CONQUERED THE DRABBLE.

HOWEVER, IN SOVIET ROSSIYA, DRABBLE CONQUERS YOU. /SHOT

;asjdfl;sdjfadsf ;D winter/russia, this happens amirite 8Db

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webreathewords July 21 2010, 20:17:32 UTC
&heartsl Thanks~

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mcsourface July 21 2010, 20:09:59 UTC
I think this is one of the lovliest actual one hundred word drabbles I've seen, at least for a while.
Very effective! :D

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webreathewords July 21 2010, 20:15:29 UTC
Thank you! :)

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mcsourface July 21 2010, 20:24:35 UTC
You're welcome!

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aki_yasu July 22 2010, 03:24:52 UTC
holy crap that was awesome. X3 short but sweet and you managed to convey it all perfectly

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