Chapter 2 - Delusional Confidence

Jan 09, 2010 01:42



“It almost seems too easy...” Jaejoong murmured in contemplation, his tightened fingers making quick work of the frayed corners of a slip of scrap paper. He stared at the address, memorising the numbers and individual letters, the stark black lines turning hazed and jumbled the longer he stared. He ruffled his hair messily, frustrated hands ( Read more... )

crimson leaves, jaesu

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wednesday92p January 8 2010, 17:47:33 UTC
HU~ spot for ting5 and ekin_hardy!

im abit unsatisfired? with this chappie, i keep having this feeling that ive forgotten something... or that ive not added enough description.. ack! i can feel a writers block coming on.. :(

but anyways i hope you guys like it, im very sorry with the late update, cause ive been busy with my other story.. *bows*

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ekin_hardy January 8 2010, 18:22:04 UTC
what? Junsu spiked the drink rite?

owh, he's not the mob boss if he's so easily let himself be with a stranger without having his own plans up his sleeves rite?

Jaejoong is too naive for his own good...or is the revenge that made him so careless...

and I know Junsu wont kill Jaejoong, coz if he do that this story will end in 3 shots rite...lol

Hwaiting dear~!!! and kill the zombies wenever there's writers block...r maybe talk to the pervy master *me* to jump start ur writing again~~~

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wednesday92p January 8 2010, 18:45:04 UTC
*glomps* i know you will always be the first to comment, cause we are both night owls.. lol

junsu knew that jaejoong wanted to kill him already, but jae doesnt know that so he planned to kill him... hehe, of course there will be no character death.. i cant bring myself to it~

hehehehe, hmm zombies or you? ill take both pleasu~ *gets slapped for being greedy*

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ting5 January 9 2010, 00:48:06 UTC
Wow Junsu's smart ne, it seems he already knew Jae's out to kill him..and Jae blinded by rage and revenge didnt notice..well i guess Junsu has to be alert of stuffs like rhis as a mafia boss..

I'm wondering what Su will do with Jae now, ask Yunho to send him away or to keep him close till he's awake *stroking chin* well only time will tell and for you to reveal it :D

Oooh writer's block, that's not good..hmm I'll gladly hand you a hammer to knock it down if it does happen XDD hope it doesnt ^^

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jaeluvsme January 8 2010, 21:56:50 UTC
New reader. I love the story so far, it's really rare that su is portrayed as a tough guy. Hope you'll update soon :)

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wednesday92p January 9 2010, 04:35:36 UTC
yayy~! new reader! *jumps in glee* im glad you like the story, thks for reading! (^_^)

hee, i kinda got tired of reading too many stories where junsu is the sweet/innocnet/cute/bubbly kinda guy... so this will break the stardard~! :)

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wednesday92p January 9 2010, 04:35:58 UTC
-_-* standard*

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han_seoul January 9 2010, 02:59:50 UTC
ooo yay new update:)
I can't wait to see what happens next, especially with Jaejoong now out cold and all.

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wednesday92p January 9 2010, 04:37:50 UTC
huhu~ your pic looks cute, but i cant really make out the faces.. is changmin on the far left?? o.O

hehe, i wonder whats gonna happen too~ *blink blink* :D but rest assured hes not gonna die..

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