The shower scene was my favourite, capricious and sensuous. The dialogue in Chapter 2 is very witty. I am sure Chapter 3 will be great because you've already left some intrguing elements here. Good job!
I'm glad I got Day 2 because it was just so much fun to put out ideas and little suggestions then just wait to see what would get picked up on and how everyone else would continue the threads. They did brilliant days that tied up everything, which is always more complicated than just throwing a new idea into the mix. Of course those at the end of the week got the benefit of not having to wait to read the rest of the story so that's not a bad place to be either! *chuckle*
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I so loved this chapter, very well done job I love Dracos character like this hehe
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