Day 4

Jun 30, 2004 17:24

Day 4 by slytherinlinzi!

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cy1992 July 1 2004, 00:03:42 UTC
Ah very sorry, how can I miss 'i' for your name? I typed it too quick. Really sorry, Linzi, please don't flame me.

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raffyv July 1 2004, 02:57:10 UTC
That was lovely, Linz! Another smut-free story and/or chapter yet I had fun reading it!
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sweden_girl25 July 1 2004, 05:49:34 UTC
I jsut love this chapter can not wait for more great job

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x_ning July 1 2004, 09:26:07 UTC
Oh well, no smut, but that's ok! I like the drama and tension in this chapter, how you portrayed everyone and their feelings. That suicide bit was funny =]

Poor Hermione and Draco! C'mon! Why don't they just...get back together and get it on again? *sigh*

Linzi, absolutely wonderful.

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bobotuberpus July 1 2004, 17:22:23 UTC
Thanks for writing day 4. Enjoyed it as much as I did the others.

Is there a reason behind Moana's name? When I first read it, it kinda reminded me of those Macadamia Nut chocolates you get from people who've visited Hawai'i.

Draco trying to rescue Hermione was funny. And while it's not clear that there's a Harry/Pansy thing going on or if things are just platonic, I did notice she yelled his first name instead of "Potter" when she broke the portkey.

Can't wait for day 5.

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acony_bell July 1 2004, 19:00:39 UTC
Moana's name means Ocean. It is Hawaiian, lol.

I'm glad younliked it!

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