I found poetry on my computer!

Jun 08, 2007 12:27

Longing (Pantoum)

We sat alone in the darkened room,

The glow from the doorway dusted the sheets.

Powder light silver haloed your head, touched your face.

I watched you, a willow bough swept in the wind.

The glow from the doorway dusted the sheets.

And the light from the screen painted your face with emeralds.

I watched you, a willow ( Read more... )

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stormcatcher_ June 8 2007, 12:39:41 UTC
Wow--these are really amazing! Very vivid imagery and color, I can really picture the scenes these evoke clearly in my mind. Lovely work.

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amoux June 14 2007, 02:31:23 UTC
These are amazingly lovely. I intend to read them again over a nice, warm cup of chai sometime. ^^ Thanks for your support, by the way. You is good kitty. *petpets* <3

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