Oh, I loved this! It's wonderfully sweet without being sentimental. You have a very light touch with your phrasing. This: Yuuya is there to catch Yanagi when he falls.
My heart thumped. Lovely. I really liked the detailed way you made the connections between them real and deep, Yuuya knowing that something is off with Yanagi, not being able to find a broom, Yanagi's memories. This: Yanagi tastes like dark coffee and sugar, Yuuya registers absentmindedly, a little bitter and a little sweet. Just fabulous.
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Yuuya is there to catch Yanagi when he falls.
My heart thumped. Lovely. I really liked the detailed way you made the connections between them real and deep, Yuuya knowing that something is off with Yanagi, not being able to find a broom, Yanagi's memories. This:
Yanagi tastes like dark coffee and sugar, Yuuya registers absentmindedly, a little bitter and a little sweet.
Just fabulous.
Really loved this ficlet! Thank you! ♥♥
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