[ES21] Like Water

[weirdlyyours]

Title: Like Water
Series/Pairings: Eyeshield 21; Yukimitsu
Notes: For 31_days: September 6 / there's an art to this. In the Happiness for Now universe.
Summary: Football isn't as easy as it looks.

Comments

[smakn]

I can't remember who this character is, but you write this very nicely. How dreams don't always become reality.

Nice work.

[weirdlyyours]

Unfortunately, effort isn't always enough. :( Thank you.

[skelevitt]

Aw, now I actually feel sorry for Yukimitsu because of your other piece, lol! Poor Yukimitsu! (And what a bastard Hiruma is, lol!)

[weirdlyyours]

Haha, Hiruma does what he must to win. And Yukimitsu eventually perseveres.

[livingtea]

<3. oh yukimitsu. i always feel like crying when i see how hard he tries but he simply can't do it. like that part during the death march. when he falls down oh. my "heart" or whatever part of my brain that controls my emotions (hm i should know this... oops.) just. just. i dunno. oh yukimitsu.

thank you for writing. <3.

[livingtea]

also. lovely fic.

[weirdlyyours]

But he's so hard-working. Even though he falls down, he doubles back and runs forward once more. I admire and envy his tenacity. Thank you for reading. ♥

[dayofcaligula]

Oh, this mood can be clearly felt in him before the game with Nagas. Still good, still good.

[weirdlyyours]

My heart broke for him when he was crying after he was cut. :((

[asgaja]

Oh this is just beautiful, you captured it so well. <3

[weirdlyyours]

Thank you very much. ♥