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[weirdstory]

Wrote something...

This World, You, and Me

I am above all that is you and me and we have yet to understand this world but we are it and yet above it too.

Breathe into my mind what we are and what we want from each other I want more and more but I just really what more.

Touch that place where the heart stays but not the literal heart I don’t want it

Comments

[violet_blues]

ACCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCK! That was absolutely beautiful. I love how the first line ends with "but we are it and yet above it too" and the last line ends with "but we are it and yet below it too" LOVELY! That really touched me. *sniffles*

[weirdstory]

Thank you, you are too nice. Have you ever reread some of your old poems and realized that you don't know what you were talking about? This poem did that for me. I don't get the meaning of the first and last lines...lol.