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[wenliu]

waiting
g, kibum x donghae
kibum still hasn't shown and there are five missed calls on donghae's phone
a/n: Dedicated to ddangkkoma, even though I'm probably going to make her hate Kibum more and more every time I write him. :D;

Comments

[notablender]

oh, i liked this a lot.

you have a great way of showing, not telling.

[hoyah]

thank you ! :D; i worry about my showing and telling. xD mostly because sometimes i'm so vague, nobody knows what i'm trying to show

[notablender]

i'd take vagueness over being beaten over the head with meaning any day :)

and tbh i think this problem exists only in fandom. with good books most of the time you aren't told anything straight up.

[hoyah]

lol thanks xD

[thundersquall]

D:

[hoyah]

kekeke oh i should have dedicated this to ddangkkoma - brb

[thundersquall]

... She will love it but why are you making her hate Kibum, it's a hard enough job for me to keep her on him DDD:

[hoyah]

xD she's already read it - i wrote it for her in a comment thread on the post with the yewook i posted a couple days back

[katsudono]

;____;

like diana said - you have this way of showing and not telling. i love it. ♥

have you been writing more? 8D;
/sounds like a creeper.

[wenliu]

:D thank you

more...what? :D

[katsudono]

just... more?
i keep thinking i hardly ever see you writing. D:

[wenliu]

lol i've been kind of going through a dry spell, so far as fic inspiration comes - or writing inspiration in general. i've been trying to write more, though :D; and this is all i've got so far. oh except for my kangin/taeyeon/shiwon love triangle wip

[taylormercury]

yay, writing!
BUT WHY NO CAPS? :(

anyway, I'm going to agree with other commentors on the showing not telling, inform you that I enjoy your writing, and give you this ♥
You should write more things that I can read XD

[wenliu]

:( it felt too short for caps lol

xD lol my next fic will have caps, just for you

[taylormercury]

Nothing is too short for caps! Even this comment! XDDD

[wenliu]

*dies* xD but but

[wenliu]

lol everyone seems to be commenting on that XD i wonder if it's just because you're all seeing each other's comments! lol but thank you :D

[notablender]

haha XD. i'm glad i started a trend :D