(because I'm a tease and a whore for feedback)

[weslyn]

Somewhere between the idea of another installment of my ficlet series and writing a Riechenbach Epic, the porn bunnies jumped me and sensible writing was abandoned for PWP. I will not apologise.

Comments

[speccygeekgrrl]

gate = gait

aside from that sole nitpick, I seriously want to see what led up to this and where it is going!

[weslyn]

and this is why I need a beta ~thank you! I've bits and pieces written as the inspiration strikes me. I may have a beta on board for this, but if you'd like I can send you what I have - I could always use a first reader for cheer-leading and suggestions.

BTW, saw your manip. Me gusta.

[weslyn]

the lead up, in case you missed it. ;3

[phoenix64]

I don't read nearly enough fic in which Sherlock balks after he's made the leap, so to speak. It's definitely an idea I'd like to see explored more.

[weslyn]

Hm, I write fic because I feel there's this empty void that's really not explored to my own satisfaction. IMHO, Sherlock would definitely have some inner-conflict about the introduction of sex. He's a thirty-something virgin - there must be a reason he's held himself so aloft, and subsequently, there must be MORE of a reason for him to relax his self-control and make such a leap.

[waeter]

I agree, and I think the thing he'd have to struggle against the most would be his pride. I ...kinda get this vibe from him that says "look at you, little people, I'm so far above your primitive urges", so discovering a sex drive in himself would feel like a degradation, I suppose. Epic luuurve for Jawn might be helpful here, IMO. xD

Aside from that, love this little snippet! :)

[weslyn]

Mm, yep yep! Agreeing with you on all fronts. I think I'm going to have to shock Sherlock through the first initial orgasm with John - have his arousal take him by surprise and then be too interested/curious/egoistical-(like he has something to prove) to back down. What do you think?

[kyshandra]

Yummy