with half lit eyes i stared to that room

Mar 22, 2004 21:39

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jillary March 22 2004, 19:15:25 UTC
ok, i liked yesterdays but i really really like this one even more. this one flows better but yesterdays was good too cuz the lyrics seemed more unique. i dunno. theyre both good.

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PS. jillary March 22 2004, 19:32:08 UTC
WestLakeThug64 : only sweet smelling girls with candys in their privates

WestLakeThug64 : im blushin you cant see
WestLakeThug64 : but it would be kinda cool i guess to be with a girl and find some sour patch kids

WestLakeThug64 : hey thatd be kinda hot for a fat kid like me to be like hey baby zzziiipp whoah theres a sandwich in here
WestLakeThug64 :and then be like hold up ill get to you latrer baby its love sandwich time

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melisshki March 22 2004, 19:25:09 UTC
GOOD JAB!

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sabrinadb March 24 2004, 21:53:52 UTC
I agree with Jill that I like the flow of these lyrics more. Because I know you, it's so hard for me to read these without trying to analyze them and trying to see what aspect of your life your writing about. As I read the last one about the plastic spoon in your mouth, I was confused asto if you were writing about yourself or another person. With this one I'm immagining that your writing about yourself. Things probably would be best not analyzed though, they usually are better that way.

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westlakethug March 25 2004, 17:43:39 UTC
well actually the plastic spoon reference is what i was listening to on the other entry its a who song ----------------------you know that song substitute-----------------ndb

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