updated addmissions essay!!!

[westwrestler16]

Life is one big scuba dive - a massive trip into the blue that will take me through uncharted territories, and the education and experience I receive throughout life is the air that fills my scuba tank. Math equations, chemical structures, and essay formats, all of this along with some life changing opportunities, are used to fill my tank and

Comments

[blackcorduroy]

rob, they're trying to find out about YOU, not their own school.
your opening paragraph is awesome.

[blackcorduroy]

no the question is what does coastal offer that will allow you to accomplish your life goals.

[blackcorduroy]

ok well in that case, it was perfect.
haha <333 love