Comments | wewerentcrazy08: She's A Lady

wewerentcrazy08

She's A Lady

Jan 19, 2009 21:11

My First Fanfic Ever =/ .........
SHE'S A LADY: PART 1
A Quil/Claire Story

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Christmas Eve, one of the biggest holidays down in La Push. Everyone was gathered together in the town hall it. It was a huge building where the elders held their meetings and where wedding receptions where held. Tonight there was a ( Read more... )

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Comments 5

anirishtwilight January 20 2009, 17:02:53 UTC

The storyline seems very familiar...:\

It is pretty good, but you need to do some proofreading before you post. There are a bunch of typos and homonym problems.

Other than that I like the idea of her bringing home another boyfriend...even though the rest of it is really really similar to my story.

wewerentcrazy08 January 20 2009, 19:43:24 UTC

lol sorry i really didnt mean for it to be. its my first try at it so im kinda just testing it outt.

agathons_fan January 21 2009, 02:20:14 UTC

I did kinda notice this too. Although this one has a twist into it about bringing home a guy. I thought it was kinda funny. And than felt really bad for Quil :P

agathons_fan January 21 2009, 02:18:36 UTC

Not bad for your first fanfic. Poor Quil. Claire has to at least feel that this new IT isnt going to work out. Hehe, "IT."

Im really into Claire/Quil as well. Although it be perfectly honest with you. Im not that big a J/B shipper. I just cant see it happening. But thats just my opinon. This is your fic and I respect your choice to ship. :D I will work very hard at accepting them, I mean it is AU after all anyway. Im sorry, I dont want to seem rude or mean, I just felt for whatever reason that I should put it out there. Because other than that, it seems like its going to be a really good story and cant wait for an update.

wewerentcrazy08 January 22 2009, 19:30:22 UTC

lol dont really its not rude at all. i totally understand the e/b relationship when twilight first came out, and i mean like VERYYY first came out i was a hard e/b shipper in fact the first time i read new moon i even skipped over all the middle and just got to the end because i wanted edward back :) thanks for the comment i really appreciate it :) :) :)