Comments | wh_mermaid: I'd like to be free like that, spread my wings so high

wh_mermaid

I'd like to be free like that, spread my wings so high

Dec 26, 2011 21:13

Title: I’d like to be free like that, spread my wings so high
Pairing: Carlos Marchena/Raul Albiol, hinted Villa/Silva
Word Count: 3205
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not true
Summary: Carlos notices Raul for the first time when he’s seventeen and as the years pass, still can’t bring himself to make a move. Fluff warning. Written for snowstranger for the fblslash ( Read more... )

carlos marchena, raul albiol, fic

Comments 17

weekendoffender December 29 2011, 04:40:59 UTC

This was just gorgeous =)

wh_mermaid December 29 2011, 06:55:16 UTC

thank you ^_^

luxover January 5 2012, 12:00:28 UTC

Omg why am I on my phone right now, there is so much I want to say and copy/pasta. I LOVE this fic omg. I don't know anything about Carlos, but it didn't matter at all, I was still totally pulling for him. And Raul! Omg that is exactly one hundred and ten percent how I imagine him to be, kind of stupid but not so much that you can't stand him ( ... )

wh_mermaid May 16 2012, 14:39:34 UTC

I'm dumb and never replied to this. Uber dumb because you leave the best comments and what not <3

Glad you liked, seriously had never written them before and was like '.. oh jfc why do I do exchanges' but then was pleasantly surprised.... only fluffy thing I'll ever write tbh. Except anything dealing with Sounders. But that's real life and what not

<3

driedstardono March 17 2012, 13:28:47 UTC

All throughout this story I had laughter burbling out of me in the most unattractive of ways. Also holding my computer so I could twist around rapidly to express my joy. I can't stop smiiiilinnnnnnnng because everything was so precious and heart-tugging and oh I just cannot deal with all of this--I especially loved how you fucked with Villa's head at the end :) he deserves it.

wh_mermaid May 16 2012, 14:40:19 UTC

late reply is late, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. Most of the time I write angsty stuff, so this was a departure from the norm and dare I say.... I enjoyed writing it?

Thanks boo <3

sillypiglets2 May 16 2012, 00:00:50 UTC

Ohh, this was so precious. It filled me with the warm and fuzzies. Raul, Carlos and even David were absolutely delightful. And I wonder, how the hell did I miss this?

wh_mermaid May 16 2012, 14:41:19 UTC

I think I posted it with a bunch of NC17 stuff in one post to fbslash, so it's only natural that it got missed (psh, I'd be all like ooooooo porn, screw the fluff). I'm glad you found it and enjoyed it <3