Stalker (Chapter Five)

[whale667]

Title: Stalker (Chapter 5)

Genre: smut (well sort of...nearly)!, school life?, angst

Rating: NC-17 (sorry for people who can’t read this...haha fuck the rating! Read it anyways! ...ah wait. I’ll probably get shouted at for corrupting a minor. Sorry.) and PG-13? Well, just scroll down so you don’t have to read the smut J or just wait until the next

Comments

[whale667]

spot for diane :D
haha don't know how to link in people in a comment... i fail. sorry love!

[princess_jaded]

It's cool babe!
I'm here. I'm reading! Brb with my REAL comment!

[princess_jaded]

*sputters incoherently*

Exsqueeze me!? WTS just happened here!? Momma Hyukkie!? T-T
Is she alive?! You can't kill his Momma!!! That bitch and him be close! (wtf am i talking about?!)

ALMOST SMUT!? That's my OT4 and you didn't go all the way! KinkyKyu - you whore! He stared it all! Sucking off Min, then attacking Hae and Hyukkie! I LOOOOVE it!

Diane ♥'s Blair!
<33333

[whale667]

LAWL! you must wait until the next chapter. oh i actually can't wait to write it - and i can't even say! oh the mystery XD

haha well, it couldn't be full smut! i mean, donghae is still a virgin and i don't think he wants his first time to be a foursome! XD ....(i don't see why not...i mean come on it's hyuk, kyu, and min.)

:D ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[fishydotlove]

Oh my god!!!
*flails at the almost foursome* LOL

naughty kyumin XDDDDD
EUNHAEEEEE!

and what a cliffhangerD: more!more!

avatar? srsly? i havent watch it yet, maybe i'll go and watch it xD

[whale667]

haha i know, kyu just wants sex really! ...and i love it :P

i feel bad for making it a cliffie...the next update will be soon no doubt :D

omg yes! it is so fucking ace. ahhhh i can't even give a proper review it was that fucking amazing! go see it - now!

[headless_bex]

OMG WHAT HAPPENED!
THE SMUT WAS HOT OMGOMGOMG JKSDHNGKJSHDLKHSDG.
My eyes will lose their power of sight soon, but I DON'T CARE.
<333 -rushes to change pants-

[whale667]

i mustn't tell. it will ruin the plot ;)
but just know that something good comes from it! :D

:D i'm glad you liked it love <3
haha *hands you pair of pants* quickly, change before anybody notices anything!

thanks! :D

[headless_bex]

OKAY THAT'S GOOD! That makes things better to look forward to!
<333
HEEHEE. Thank chew for the pants.

[whale667]

oh tell me about it! i can't stop writing it...we are perverts. :D

*gets fan out and turns it on the highest* we shant let you overheat :P

thanks for reading love :D

[dbsj0001]

OMG!
my heart was beating so fast when i thought it was foursome!!
*sighs of relief*
KYUMIN is soooooo NAUGHTY!!!
can't wait for the next update!!
xD

[whale667]

haha i was going to make it one but a)it's donghae's first time so that's a little bit mean making his first a foursome and b) my god foursome's are hard to write from a first person point of view! XD

:D it will be up soon, don't worry! XD
thanks for reading :D