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what_sucka

Short Story

Apr 04, 2005 20:29

We have to work shop stories tommorrow in my advanced fiction class. I did one just now, procrastinating as usual. I am really nervous that it sucks. So if you like to read and you want to give me feed back, please do so. I am aware there are grammar mistakes, etc. but I didn't have time to go over it efficiently enough ( Read more... )

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fa3r1e April 4 2005, 17:51:13 UTC

Sara!! That was so good. You painted such a great picture with your words. I am so proud of you!! It's a really good story, it made me sad though:( I love you so much! Keep up the good work!! I wouldn't change a thing about it.

what_sucka April 4 2005, 19:02:05 UTC

Thank you, jess. That means so much to me coming from you. I appreciate your feedback a lot. You're my baby. maybe one day i will write something about you:)

fa3r1e April 4 2005, 20:03:54 UTC

Yay! I didn't know you wrote lesbian erotica. BAHAHAH! ♥

ex_einzelka April 7 2005, 03:49:23 UTC

Why not? It is her story! :)

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ex_einzelka April 10 2005, 06:21:43 UTC

The story is wonderful! I agree with Jessica complely, you drew a wonderful picture with your words.

what_sucka April 12 2005, 14:43:29 UTC

thanks, brad! that means a lot to me! :) How very kind of you to read it, I know it's really long.

Thanks again.