Profile review.

[invidia1988]

Just curious I don't know if this is allowed but can I have some reviews on my profile I am writing. Don't mind the grammar mistakes just the main body of it. I'll be editing the grammar mistakes later. I have major problems in writing profiles so this is a huge attempt to try and make it look half-way decent.

I am sorry if this isn't allowed but I

Comments

[dubia_lux]

This post is completely allowed, don't worry.

As for the profile, you may want to consider dividing it into sections? I find that helps organize things and makes them visually appealing as well as easier to write.

The common sections are usually base stats (birthday, age, gender, etc), personality and history.

[invidia1988]

Thank you I'll make sure to do that. I'll be updating this post with a revised version.

[firm_detective]

I have no profile, just a set of notes that I keep for myself. I assume that telling people it's an AU L with mostly-canon behavior will be enough... there's nothing in his background that deviates from canon, really, and it's a DN RPG, not a multi-universe one where people might genuinely not know who L is.

My notes are "this is what I think we can take for granted or suss out from canon stuff; this is what I have developed for myself, particular to Firm-Detective-L." They're very TL;DR.

So anyway, LJ ATE MY "NOTES" POST TODAY. Now it's all over the place. D:

orz

(I do have a copy, but meh, getting it back into the right format is going to be such a problem that I'm thinking of starting from scratch.)

[invidia1988]

Thank you for your help. *has more stuff to do now.*