SG-1 Fic: There's No Such Thing as a Brontosaurus (PG-13)

[what_works]

Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Title: There's No Such Thing as a Brontosaurus
Author: Em
Rating: PG-13 for language
Word Count: ~9,500
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Prompt: from brainofck for the Jack/Daniel Ficathon: cluelessness, tropical settings, dinosaurs!
Summary: Being chased by a dinosaur has some unusual benefits-but Jack's too clueless to figure them out on his

Comments

[green_grrl]

Eee! Science!Jack! Notapaleontologist!Daniel! So adorable! They're snarky and silly and when they aren't together it hurts. I just love the touches--Jack wanting to brush Daniel's arm, Daniel touching Jack's scratched face. ♥

[theemdash]

In my head Daniel bitched a lot more about not being a paleontologist but when I wrote it down I just wanted to kick him and I figured it would be harder to sell that yes, Jack still wants to sleep with him. ;)

I love the touches, too. They're very touchy.

[dragojustine]

Oh my god, so much LOVE!

The teamy goodness in the first "no such thing as a brontasaurus" bit is perfect- Carter's dismay. And Teal'c is perfectly done too.

But mostly... oh god, oblivious asshole Daniel. He was being SO horrible- like it didn't even occur to him that the mission wasn't about him. And everybody knew but him. And then the huddling for warmth! And actually talking! And Smart!Jack! EEEE!

[theemdash]

Hee! Glad you enjoyed it so! I love writing the whole team. ♥

I think Daniel is kind of oblivious and self-centered when it's not obvious he should be caring about someone else, but Jack doesn't seem to mind. ;)

[secondalto]

Smart, geeky, sciency Jack!! *LOVE* It was worth the wait.

[theemdash]

Yay! Thanks!

[brainofck]

the ultimate in unreliable narrators

Hahahaha! :D

[theemdash]

Yay! I wasn't sure all of Daniel's feelings were coming through Jack, but I tried my best to get them across. I love unreliable narrators. ♥

*hugs*

[theemdash]

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