Comments | whatisnarva: Fanfic, Axis Powers Hetalia

whatisnarva

Fanfic, Axis Powers Hetalia

Feb 03, 2011 00:15

[Title: One week in winter [Saturday] 2/7
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Characters: Norway, Sweden, (with gratious amounts of other Nordics showing up in flashbacks/inner monologue/etc)
Pairing: Sweden/Norway
Rating: G
A/N: for chiisana00 , prompt was "Gakuen setting, where it is DenNor and SuFin on the outside but secretly SuNor behind the masks; some alone ( Read more... )

+au, !fanfiction, sweden/norway, norway, *one week in winter, sweden, -pairing

Comments 8

chiisana00 February 3 2011, 08:46:53 UTC

It's still beginning of story so I can't say much xD So there will be more ehh... "action" later? xD I mean, for now the story seems quite "flat". But again it's only beginning of story =D

Of course you can add in other charas into the story, to fuel up things ya know x3

-Enjoyed the AN as well-

whatisnarva February 3 2011, 15:25:24 UTC

Mhhh *ponders* I might redo this chapter. *nodnod*

And ffft there will be tons of headcanon in this fic, I guessed that at least explaining some of it would be a good idea.

More importantly, is the relationship between the characters so far okay, and... I wanted to ask, how far should "UST" go?

chiisana00 February 3 2011, 16:32:00 UTC

Mmm.... To the length of where France can see it clearly? xD -laughs-

I really have no idea tbh 8| -Deserve to be shot-

whatisnarva February 3 2011, 16:40:47 UTC

Neither of them would be the kind to outright cheat on their partner, so... Kissing and some holding each other in a more than brotherly embrace, probably?

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sado_nishi February 7 2011, 10:28:52 UTC

I really like this so far. I really love seeing fics written for Sweden and Norway because there just isn't enough out there, and I find their relationship intriguing (whether romantic or not). You make the gakuen setting work really well, and I can't wait to read more.

Also, I love Norway's coffee habits.

whatisnarva February 10 2011, 13:36:05 UTC

Thank you! This is my first time writing any kind of AU setting, so I'm glad to hear that it turned out good. Thank you a lot for commenting!

I kind of want Italy and Norway (and maybe Spain) to get together at some point and complain about other nations' coffee habits. |D

sado_nishi February 19 2011, 10:46:13 UTC

You're welcome! I do like the AU setting. And I really like the way you portray how Norway and Sweden are comfortable with the quietness in the first chapter. Sometimes people forget that not every pair needs to be the exact opposites of each other.

Norway hanging out with England and Russia is awesome. :D