FIC - It's still just love... (10/?)

Apr 11, 2012 20:42

Title: It's still just love… (10/?)
Author: wheelie47
Rating: NC17 for whole story but not every chapter.
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 3,074
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Warning: Angst!
Summary: Noah Mayer is struggling to make ends meet; trying to keep his garden centre open ( Read more... )

alternative universe, atwt, luke, fanfiction, noah

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jeri_1116 April 12 2012, 15:57:25 UTC
Wow! Noah's day just got real shitty, first Luke flat leaves him and then he runs into his ex with the man he cheated with- who by the way had the nerve to ask if he wanted to eat dinner with them. Yes, Noah like you, I ask was he fucking serious ( ... )

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wheelie47 April 19 2012, 21:44:30 UTC
Thanks Arsena! Yeah - Noah was having one hell of a bad day.

I can see Max and Maddie thrashing out their differences lol Max is a good friend. We could all do with a Max. And you're right show!Maddie was annoying.

And I agree, Luke can't keep stringing Noah along.

Thanks so much for reading x

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newhaven183 April 12 2012, 17:31:40 UTC
In this chapter, Noah does a lot of falling and stumbling - literally and figuratively, doesn't he? Yet in the end, he manages to "right" himself AND that troubled soul he's fallen in love with...right into a comforting bed..

Whole chapter masterfully written. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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wheelie47 April 19 2012, 21:47:43 UTC
Thanks so much, Sue. Yes Noah is having a really bad day but at least Luke ends up telling Noah the truth. I wanted to end the chapter on a positive note after all the angst. Glad you thought it worked.

Thanks again x

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123cariad April 12 2012, 20:09:00 UTC
God that was one hell of a chapter , so many Emotions all mixed up in total confusion , Poor Luke, Poor Noah I am so happy Luke got the hug he needed beautifully written chapter Anne just perfect xx

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wheelie47 April 19 2012, 21:48:54 UTC
Thanks so much for all your wonderful support, Stella.

Glad you liked the chapter. Luke sure did need a comforting hug there didn't he?

Thanks again x

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sarahsezlove April 15 2012, 13:50:51 UTC
This just gets better and better, Anne. The tangled web of Luke's life and lies are beginning to unravel...and I can't wait to see what they become. I'm hoping for happy ever after...but that's just me!! X

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wheelie47 April 19 2012, 22:03:10 UTC
Thanks so much Sarah. Glad you're enjoying the story. Luke's world is rapidly crumbling around him.

Mmmm?! A happy ending?! Who knows!

Thanks again x

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crownroyal_51 April 16 2012, 18:57:29 UTC
I'm so happy that Noah hasn't given up on Luke. Can't wait to see where they're going to go from here!

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wheelie47 April 19 2012, 22:04:30 UTC
Thanks so much Dawn. I think Noah wants to walk away but he just can't help himself.

Where do they go from here indeed.

Thanks again x

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