FIC - It's still just love... (13/?)

May 06, 2012 18:22

Title: It's still just love… (13/?)
Author: wheelie47
Rating: NC17 for whole story but not every chapter.
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 2,863
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Warning: Angst!
Summary: Noah Mayer is struggling to make ends meet; trying to keep his garden centre open ( Read more... )

alternative universe, atwt, luke, fanfiction, noah

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seajellybaby May 6 2012, 18:03:00 UTC
OMG NO! Charlene! What an innocent mistake but terrible for Luke! OH Goodness!

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wheelie47 May 12 2012, 19:11:16 UTC
Thanks Gill! Charlene - I know you were doing it for the right reasons but OMG! What were you thinking!

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asonearth May 6 2012, 18:26:38 UTC
wow, what an emotional chapter.. but all in all very sad. As for Noah, i can understand he is hurt and maybe seeing Luke interact with his family just proved that Luke wouldn't say anything anytime soon.. so yes, he has a right to take a breake. Luke , such a lost soul here. he can't win, wether it's coming out to his family or hide an lose Noah.. i really feel sad for him and i wondered the whole story along how you would solve this problem. so you threw in Charlene... don't know if it was a smart move, i guess not, but considering Luke's ( and MArc's) situation i think there was no easy way out anyway.. as i sad, very sad and right now a truly lose/lose situation. and just for the record : I hate Damian with a vengeance, i have no words...
great chapter, thanks for the update<3 Annette

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wheelie47 May 12 2012, 19:16:06 UTC
Thanks so much, Annette. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.

Yes you are right. It was a sad chapter. Nothing seems to be going right for our boys.

And Charlene did what she did for what she thought was the right reasons but she has just made things so much worse.

Where now for our boy?

Thanks so much x

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123cariad May 6 2012, 18:58:51 UTC
Aaaw Now can I give Luke a cwtch bless and he doe not even know why , Charlene all good intentions Anne and amazing chapter loving the story so looking forward to seeing how you play out the remaining story xx

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wheelie47 May 12 2012, 19:17:49 UTC
Thanks so much Stella! Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Charlene - what were you thinking?! She did what she did for all the right reasons but she just made things so much worse.

Thanks again x

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boriqua522 May 7 2012, 00:58:31 UTC
oh no!!! i wept for noah and his pain and now for luke. i do hope that luke gets to tell that asshole of a father off and he can do it soon. please tell me luke doesn't do something dumb. he'll probably blame noah, of course. please continue soon. maybe damian can get hit by a mack truck crossing the road ;} a person can wish, can't they?

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wheelie47 May 12 2012, 19:22:24 UTC
Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Poor boys - nothing seems to be going right for the boys at the minute. They are both suffering so much at the moment. Where now for them?

And Damian - well we certainly can wish.

Thanks again x

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karen_jk May 7 2012, 17:21:23 UTC
This is gripping and exciting! Charlene, you put your foot in it. Now that Luke is outed, though, maybe he'll see the light.

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wheelie47 May 12 2012, 19:25:48 UTC
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Charlene did what she did with the best of intentions but has she just made things worse for Luke?

Where now for our boys?

Thanks again x

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