FIC - Its still just love (14/15)

May 12, 2012 21:04

Title: It's still just love… (14/15)
Author: wheelie47
Rating: NC17 for whole story but not every chapter.
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 3,353
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Warning: Angst!
Summary: Noah Mayer is struggling to make ends meet; trying to keep his garden centre open ( Read more... )

alternative universe, atwt, luke, fanfiction, noah

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neddiheht May 14 2012, 15:28:15 UTC
this is heartbreaking!!! I hope that things look up in the next chapter... and that it comes soon!

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wheelie47 May 18 2012, 19:49:36 UTC
Thank Ash! It is rather heartbreaking, isn't it? This story has turned out to be way more angsty than I'd originally intended… I've kind of got myself stuck in angst mode. Let's hope that things look up a little in the last chapter!

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jeri_1116 May 16 2012, 15:54:10 UTC
Did Charlene, put sleeping pills in Luke's food?

I understand Luke's rage, but Max knows Noah he wouldn't do that and Luke should know it too. But I guess when you are angry you can't think straight ha! Straight. ;) Anyway I see why he did that to Noah's lab.

I do like the fact that he kinda sees what Charlene did as a blessing, because now it's out there and there's no going back.

Also please kill Lily, women like that piss me off. I couldn't disown my child no matter what. So for her to even say those words to him, just yuck.

And I get why Noah didn't ask him to stay Luke needs to start making some of his own choices, he needs to figure out what to do. He should stay, but Noah shouldn't make that choice, Luke needs to grow up and live his life and not give a fuck what his father thinks or his mother, since there's certain conditions pinned on whether they could love him or not.

Great chapter Anne. I can't wait for the conclusion of this- cause I know it'll be good. :)

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wheelie47 May 18 2012, 19:56:17 UTC
Thanks Arsena!

No, Charlene didn't put sleeping pills in Luke's food. Damn! I wish I had thought of that, it sounds way more dramatic than Luke falling asleep because all the emotion caught up with him (poor baby!)

Think straight LOL!

You'd hope that Lily would even try to understand Luke. Let's hope she redeems herself a little in the last chapter.

And you're right, Noah does want Luke to stay and Luke should stay but it should be his own choice and he really needs to stand on his own two feet.

Thanks again x

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daan73 June 19 2012, 23:06:09 UTC
gosh that is so powerful
so many emotions there
gosh my heart aces for both of them :(

xx

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wheelie47 June 22 2012, 00:10:56 UTC
Thanks so much Dani! Glad you liked the chapter.

Poor boys - how can there be a way forward for them now?

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