FIC - First Knight (1/?)

[wheelie47]

Title: First Knight (1/?)
Author:wheelie47
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 3,553
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Summary: Set in the fictional land of feudal Western Atlantia, Lord Luke has an encounter with a certain dark-haired young knight…
Written in the what_did_you_do. Also

Comments

[valenti1965]

Loved it Anne...so imaginative!!! Love Luke going to check Noah was ok and they shared some loving together. Great use of the prompt! x

[wheelie47]

Thanks Lou! So glad you enjoyed it and liked the use of the prompt. It was the first thing that came into my head and I just went with it x

[sarahsezlove]

This was just perfect, Anne.

Your opening paragraph drew me in with such beautiful imagery and I was hooked from there.

And I totally loved how Luke went from a serious young man with the cares of the world on his shoulders to a man full of smiles and sparkle. Only Noah could do that to him.

Perfect.

[sarahsezlove]

Me again!!

Forgot to say that I really like the juxtaposition of the horrors of war and the innocence of first love. Very powerful.

That's all :)

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much for coming back and saying that. It means such a lot.

It's good that they can find some solace in each other in the midst of all that destruction.

Thanks Sarah!

[wheelie47]

Awww thanks so much for your wonderful comments, Sarah! You're making me blush again.

There's only Noah that can put that sparkle into Luke's eyes in the midst of all that war and fighting.

Thanks again x

[scottiegilles]

Very good :) and differant really enjoyed :D

[wheelie47]

Thanks Scott! So glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reading and commenting x

[cindyls1969]

See, I knew tagging you was an excellent idea! Perfection in every word Anne. Bravo!

[wheelie47]

LOL Cindy! It was the first thing that came into my head... probably because I'd been watching Game of Thrones!

Thanks, glad you liked it x

[newhaven183]

He watched in awe as the young knight’s manhood grew even harder and droplets of clear liquid gathered at the head.

Hearing the increasingly labored breathing above him, Luke looked up again. “Is this to your liking, Sir Noah?” he asked coyly, his eyes widening as he watched the man above him becoming undone.

“I…,” Noah swallowed and tried to find his voice, his mouth suddenly dry. “Please… please, do not stop.” He could not believe that this man… his lord… was kneeling in front of him with his hand wrapped around his hard flesh, pleasuring him like this.

THUD! **Newhaven183 posts her most sincere, deepest regrets that she is unable to form a coherent sentence at this time. You are advised to check back later when she has regained the power of speech**

[wheelie47]

LOL thanks Sue! Hope you've recovered there! Glad you enjoyed it x