FIC - First Knight (2/?)

[wheelie47]

Title: First Knight (2/?)
Author: wheelie47
Rating: NC17 (not for every chapter)
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 2,705
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Summary: Set in the fictional land of feudal Western Atlantia, King Damian has been overthrown and has fled the Kingdom of

Comments

[boriqua522]

OMGOMGOMGOMG!!! i couldn't believe you continued this. i thought the first part was a one-shot. but now i'm jumping for joy that you decided to go on with this. i love that they can't even look at one another without their intense love and desire for each other showing in their faces. DAMN, i was hooked before, now i'm addicted. so who's the cloaked figure and how is he going to affect the lives of our boys? also, is it possible in this world for two men to love one another and be together? i hope so, i'd hate for the boys to be kept apart by hate and prejudice. okay, enough questions. thank you for continuing with this wonderful story. can't wait for the next update; no matter how long you take ;}

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much! I'd meant to continued it a while ago but got sidetracked by reading all the BB stories.

So glad you're enjoying the stories. And oh yeah - these boys have got it bad for each other.

LOL so many questions - you'll have to just wait and see ;)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Your comments always mean so much xx

[hollyoaks1021]

Oh wow Anne. That was amazing. I'm so pleased you decided to continue with this. Now who is the cloaked figure who was witness to what went on in the stable. Can't wait to find out.
Oh and I so loved the line... He smiled sadly; it was almost as if his feet knew where his heart wanted him to go… finding the place in the whole encampment where he felt most at ease and the closest to his father…. That was sad but so beautiful.

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much Sally. Glad you enjoyed it.

Mmm who is the cloaked figure? All will be revealed... eventually!!

Luke really does miss Holden... he feels overwhelmed by having to lead the army unexpectedly and he just misses his father too.

Thanks again xx

[willwork4dean]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEK! I 'm so so so glad you're continuing this story! I just love it! Can't wait for the next chapter and to find out who the shadowy clearly-up-to-no-good figure is!

[wheelie47]

Thank you so much! Glad you're enjoying it.

Just who is the cloaked figure? And yep... they are definitely up to no good!

Thanks again!

[random_nic]

Oh yes, I am squeeing. You added Kevin! And then Dusty. And then REID. I know we didn't really see him, but just knowing he's there exacerbating people's excruciating pain warms my heart, you know?

I wonder if the ominous figure is one of the above, or someone else? Also wondered who the sorcerer is. Why do I feel like it might be someone an army shouldn't be resting its decisions on, at all?

Looking forward to the contiuation of this!

[wheelie47]

Ah thanks Nic! Oh yeah - Reid's right there in the mix... adding to ... I mean helping people with their pain.

And just who is the ominous figure? All will be revealed eventually.

Thanks for reading <3

[crownroyal_51]

I had totally forgotten about this story! I'm so glad you are continuing it. I have my suspicions as to who the hooded figure may be but I'll keep them to myself for now. Looking forward to the rest of this story!

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much! I'd a mind to continue it earlier but got side-tracked by reading the fabulous BBs... yours included.

Oooh I'd love to know who your suspicions fall on!

Thanks for reading!