FIC - First Knight (6/?)

[wheelie47]

Title: First Knight (6/?)
Author:wheelie47
Rating: NC17 (not for every chapter)
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 2,853
Warnings: Violence and character death.
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Summary: Set in the fictional land of feudal Western Atlantia, King Damian has been

Comments

[newhaven183]

God this was good, Anne! Such a tragicly beautifully written word picture. Excellent installment.

[wheelie47]

Ah thanks so much, Sue. I'm really glad this chapter worked for you. It was a hard one to write with all that action going on!

Thanks for reading and commenting. I really appreciate all your support x

[123cariad]

Aww Anne simply amazing you write like an artist paint a picture the imagery you give with each words is perfect x

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much for your wonderful comment, Stella. I'm so glad you liked the chapter and the imagery came through for you (good job it wasn't on drawsomething lol ;)

Thanks again!

[seajellybaby]

Luke is the damsel in destress! HEE HEE! Totally sexy how Noah road in to rescue and protect him... Such an exciting chapter with enemy soldiers attacking from all sides! Love it!

[wheelie47]

LOL somehow I don't think it would work if it was Noah as the damsel!!

Can you just imagine Noah charging to the rescue on his steed!

So glad you liked the chapter. Thanks Gillian :)

[crownroyal_51]

Oh no! The boys are split up. They need to be together. I'm dying to know who the spy is. I'm worried about both boys right now. Looking forward to the next chapter!

[wheelie47]

I know!! The boys split up is definitely not good!

All will be revealed eventually... promise!

Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading x

[hollyoaks1021]

Wow. Fantastic chapter Anne. I knew Luke wasn't safe back at camp and the spy is someone too close for comfort. Cant wait to read what you have in store. Loving this <3

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much Sally. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Oh yeah, Luke was not safe back at the camp and the spy is definitely someone too close for comfort!

Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for your support :)