FIC - First Knight (9/?)

[wheelie47]

Title: First Knight (9/?)
Author: wheelie47
Rating: NC17 (not for every chapter)
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 2,606
Warning: Violence. Torture
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Summary: Set in the fictional land of feudal Western Atlantia, King Damian has been overthrown and

Comments

[123cariad]

God that was intense .. Such a sweet beginning then you gave us torment .. lol you love to torture us ha ha

[wheelie47]

Ah thanks Stella! I know! This chapter does kind of go from one extreme to the other lol!

Thanks for reading xx

[crownroyal_51]

I should have known that the boys wouldn't be able to be happy for too long. I'm still dying to know who sold them out to Damian. Things are about to get really bad I fear! Looking forward to the next chapter!

[wheelie47]

Thanks for reading!

I know! This story doesn't seem to want them to be happy for too long!

I'll let you into a little secret: we find out who the spy is in the next chapter ;)

[boriqua522]

OH NO!!! you just love to torture, don't you? all that sweetness at the beginning was just so that we'd let our guard down. i knew it was too good to keep going like that! poor boys, they find love and comfort in each other only for it to be torn apart. okay, have to know, if grimaldi is luke's bio dad in this or not? if he his, well i hope luke runs a sword right through him, and if he isn't, well, i still hope the same. how are they going to get out of this? i'm dying to know. please update as soon as you can.

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

I know right! This story doesn't seem to want them to be too happy for too long! Nothing to do with me at all hehe!

OK, I'll let you into a little secret - Damian is Luke's bio-dad but neither of them know it yet.

Oh and the next chapter should be up soon.

Thanks again!

[random_nic]

Not Noah! I mean, not Luke either, but especially not Noah! Damien, you bastard!

[wheelie47]

Your poor boo Noah! I promise I'll make it up to you by having Luke beaten to a pulp later on. How's that?

Thanks for reading x

[jeri_1116]

You gonna beat Luke to a pulp?

Well, now that better be in the next chapter. ;)

[wheelie47]

HAHA!! I might have exaggerated a little!

Thanks for reading!

[jeri_1116]

Awe man why Damian, gotta be a bitch?

My poor bb's. Great chapter Anne, you sure know how to entertain us.

[wheelie47]

Thanks for reading, Arsena. Glad you were entertained.

Well somebody had to be the bitch in this and I kinda like writing evil Damian hehe!