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FIC - First Knight (10/?)

Jan 11, 2013 21:50

Title: First Knight (10/?)
Author: wheelie47
Rating: NC17 (not for every chapter)
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 1,825
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Summary: Set in the fictional land of feudal Western Atlantia, King Damian has been overthrown and has fled the Kingdom of ( Read more... )

alternative universe, atwt, luke, fanfiction, noah

Comments 6

boriqua522 January 12 2013, 01:33:42 UTC

OH NO!!! poor luke, he just can't win. first he gets captured, his noah tortured, and now this betrayal!! i'm still hoping for a sword or two running right through his middle. he needs to suffer a slow and painful death ;} i really wan't expecting kevin to be the traitor, i guess he's still an ass, no matter what world he's in. please continue soon, and gives our boys a break. i'm not to proud to beg....ppppllllleeeeeeeaaaaassssseeeeee!!!!

oh, and thanks for responding to my last review. it made me squee like a little fangirl ;D

wheelie47 January 20 2013, 19:14:52 UTC

I know right! Neither Luke or Noah are having an easy ride of it in this story!

Ah I wondered if people would be surprised that Kevin was the traitor. But if you take Reid and Dusty then Kevin is the most likely suspect; he's weak minded enough!

The next chapter will be up soon. And I guess they do get a bit of a break in this one! I wouldn't hurt either of them too badly. I like them too much!

lol glad you liked that little bit of information ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting x

123cariad January 12 2013, 12:17:39 UTC

Didn't see that coming lol Such an intense story Anne loving it I am in awe of your writing you amaze me xx

wheelie47 January 20 2013, 19:16:08 UTC

Ah thanks Stella! I wondered if people suspected Kevin at all!

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.

And thank you for the wonderful comments and the support xx

crownroyal_51 January 14 2013, 15:24:34 UTC

Great chapter! I had a feeling that Kevin might be the spy. I don't know how the boys are going to get out of this one! I can't see them surrendering but the alternative is quite dire.

wheelie47 January 20 2013, 19:17:43 UTC

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

I wondered if people suspected Kevin at all.

I know right! The boys are in quite a bind. Just how will they get out of this one.

Thanks for reading x