FIC - First Knight (13/?)

Feb 13, 2013 18:44

Title: First Knight (13/?)
Author: wheelie47
Artist hollyoaks1021
Rating: NC17 (not for every chapter)
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 4,268
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Summary: Set in the fictional land of feudal Western Atlantia, King Damian has been overthrown and has fled the ( Read more... )

alternative universe, atwt, luke, fanfiction, noah

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crownroyal_51 February 13 2013, 20:56:40 UTC
I'm so happy that Luke was reunited with his horse. It was such a sweet scene. I'm also glad that Noah seems to be on the mend and that Oliver gave the boys a chance to be alone. Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

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wheelie47 February 24 2013, 16:04:40 UTC
I just couldn't leave them apart... not for too long anyway!

Thanks for reading. Things are heading towards a big showdown!

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newhaven183 February 14 2013, 02:46:58 UTC
boy, whether it's with his horse or his lover, this Lord Snyder certainly has a soothing, sensual touch. Best medicine there is.

also like the way you treated Oliver here. much btr than you know what.

like dawn, can't wait for the next chapter.

s

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wheelie47 February 24 2013, 16:19:33 UTC
Ah thanks so much, Sue.

A loving touch is better than any soothing salve especially with these two!

I didn't want this to end up the same way as the show with Reid coming between them. Despite his acerbic nature, I wanted to experiment with him being on their side and helping them instead of forcing them apart. You know me; I prefer it when Luke and Noah are fighting against something else rather than each other!

Things are heading toward a big showdown!!

Thanks for reading x

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boriqua522 February 14 2013, 04:30:41 UTC
awwww..that was such a sweet ending. so different than what you've been giving us ;] i loved that reid told noah the truth about himself. oh, and luke being struck silent was just perfect. can't wait to see what more trouble you find for our boys. i'm hoping that others will accept them too. it would break my heart if they weren't able to be together out in the open. please continue soon.

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wheelie47 February 24 2013, 16:29:11 UTC
Thanks so much!

I know! Its about time they had a bit of a respite from all the angst. Don't blame me lol - its the story!! ;)

I wanted to experiment with Reid being on their side and not forcing them apart. And I could just picture that scene with Luke struck silent.

I don't think I'm giving anything away by saying some will accept them and some wont.

Thanks for reading x

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random_nic February 16 2013, 12:46:46 UTC
I'm not surprised Reid worked out the truth. Sweet he gave them time together - he's part doctor, part wingman! Love it.

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wheelie47 February 24 2013, 16:32:42 UTC
LOL well I guess he does have his moments!

Thanks for reading!

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123cariad February 16 2013, 19:31:37 UTC
Another great chapter Anne loved the ending xx so so sweet sucha n amzing story Anne xx

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wheelie47 February 24 2013, 16:33:47 UTC
Thanks so much Stella. Glad you liked the ending. I wanted to give them a bit a respite from all the angst.

I so glad you're enjoying the story x

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