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FIC - First Knight (15/?)

Mar 16, 2013 14:32

Title: First Knight (15/?)
Author: wheelie47
Artist hollyoaks1021
Rating: NC17 (not for every chapter)
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 2,500
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Summary: Set in the fictional land of feudal Western Atlantia, King Damian has been overthrown and has fled the ( Read more... )

alternative universe, atwt, luke, fanfiction, noah

Comments 4

random_nic March 18 2013, 00:54:00 UTC

o_O!!!!!!

wheelie47 March 25 2013, 21:54:46 UTC

LOL uh-oh! I know right!

Thanks for reading, Nic. I always appreciate your support.

newhaven183 March 18 2013, 02:47:34 UTC

Resorting to personal attacks is the true sign of a cowardly commander despite having more men and weapons. Some may leave Luke's command but i've got to hope that Luke, Noah and the remaining forces will emerge triumphant.

Hey, a reader can dream can't she?

And, oh the scene in the tent prior to meeting on the battlefield, so beautifully written.

wheelie47 March 25 2013, 22:00:08 UTC

Damian is a bully and he wanted to use that information to get what he wants: the throne of Oakdale and its men at his command. But yeah you can hope that he won't have it as easy as he thinks! There's always hope!

And I'm so glad you liked the scene in the tent. I wanted to give them a quiet moment before the storm broke!

Thanks for reading and commenting, Sue. Your support of this story is really appreciated!