FIC - First Knight (16/?)

Apr 02, 2013 16:20

Title: First Knight (16/?)
Author: wheelie47
Artist hollyoaks1021
Rating: NC17 (not for every chapter)
Pairing: Luke and Noah.
Word count: 3,953
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT, Van and Jake. No offence intended.
Warnings: Violence
Summary: Set in the fictional land of feudal Western Atlantia, King Damian has been overthrown and ( Read more... )

alternative universe, atwt, luke, fanfiction, noah

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cindyls1969 April 2 2013, 17:20:02 UTC
Oh, this is wonderful. The perfect balance of love and hate, courage and fear. I love it!

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wheelie47 April 12 2013, 19:16:00 UTC
Thanks so much, Cindy! Glad you're enjoyed it. Its hard sometimes to get that balance right so I'm glad you think it work!

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123cariad April 2 2013, 18:22:13 UTC
Anne you never cease to amaze me every new chapter you never fail to deliver excellence !!! YET ANOTHER FABULOUS CHAPTER

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wheelie47 April 12 2013, 19:16:54 UTC
Thanks so much, Stella! Your wonderful comments always make me blush. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.

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valenti1965 April 2 2013, 21:12:08 UTC
Fabulous as always Anne!!! X

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wheelie47 April 12 2013, 19:17:42 UTC
Thanks so much, Louise. Always appreciate your wonderful support x

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hollyoaks1021 April 3 2013, 13:16:40 UTC
Wow, I felt like I was in the midst of that battle.
and Luke needed all that pent up anger and aggression to overpower Damien, but thank goodness Noah was there to, in part, stop him from doing something so out of character.
Awesome chapter Anne and lets hope that this is the end of Grimaldi's tyrannical reign.

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wheelie47 April 12 2013, 19:19:33 UTC
Thanks Sally! Glad you enjoyed it. I felt exhausted writing it lol

Yes - thank goodness that Noah was there to stop Luke from doing something he would regret later on.

Thanks so much for reading!

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random_nic April 12 2013, 12:09:43 UTC
Um Noah? Boo, it's a battle. Luke is *supposed* to go all batshit and kill Damian. It's his job!

And Go Luke! I like Luke in the strong, protective role.

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wheelie47 April 12 2013, 19:21:11 UTC
lol you tell him, Nic. But he was also trying to stop Luke from doing something he might regret!

Protective and strong Luke is kinda hot isn't he ;)

Thanks for reading!

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