APH // Love me, Love me not // USUK

[whenyoufalldown]

Title: Love me, Love me not
Rating: PG
Genre: General
Characters/Pairings: America, England , USUK if you wish
Summary: America wants to know if England loves him
Words: 1115
Notes: Historical inaccuracies? Nondescript time period because American history confuses the crap out of me. Un-beta’d.

Written for hetalia_contest; theme:flower

Comments

[tokene]

Ohhh, that was really very nice. The front bit was fluffy and cute, but I loved how you did the last bit, interspersing America's thoughts with his "love mes/love me nots". And that very last few lines were great as well, gives a very nice end to the whole piece.

I really enjoyed it! :D

[whenyoufalldown]

There was originally not meant to be a fluffy cute bit but I'm a sap like that so yeah =3

I'm glad you did!

[aki_yasu]

Ohmygod. ;_; So painful, yet so sweet... aww.. >< <3

[whenyoufalldown]

:3

[kasumicc]

This is so beautiful and heartbreaking. The ending is perfect, and you did a great job on using the prompt to string together both parts. <3

*sobs*

[whenyoufalldown]

Thank you ^^ I actually wrote the ending first so I'm glad xD

[animaven]

There is that parent-child relationship between USUK that is never quite complete, because we all know that there are times when we love our parents, and there are times when we hate them. But, as a famous author said - Love Conquers All.

[whenyoufalldown]

lol true. Is it bad that the only thing running through my head when I read that was an Oedipal complex? xD

[miss_aztec57]

I love this! The end was so beautiful. Great idea for a fic as well! I remmember doing that with flowers when I was younger.... xD

[whenyoufalldown]

Thanks! Haha, I think everyone's done it at some point xD It's like, a rite of passage thing nearly.