APH// The Art of Poetry & Tis' the Season for Giving // USUK

Dec 12, 2009 14:23

Title: The Art of Poetry
Rating: G
Genre: Humour/Fluff
Characters/Pairings: America/England
Summary: Contains bad haikus / It would cause Japan much woe / If he ever saw.

Written for the hetalia_contest ; theme: art

Haikus are easy. But sometimes they don't make sense. Refrigerator. )

!fanfiction, pairing: america/england, character: america, character: england, fandom: axis powers hetalia

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Comments 31

saramon December 14 2009, 02:51:22 UTC
I must say, your skill with haiku is unparalleled. ; D

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whenyoufalldown December 14 2009, 05:21:57 UTC
lolol thank you!

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aki_yasu December 14 2009, 04:39:38 UTC
The first one is HILARIOUS and a nice breather from the choking hold and depression of finals... 8DD so THANK YOU
The second one is really cute and ahahaha America got the meaning anyway~! X3

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whenyoufalldown December 14 2009, 05:23:35 UTC
Glad to help? 8D

Thank you ^^

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galeaya December 14 2009, 15:39:40 UTC
XDDD WIN

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whenyoufalldown December 14 2009, 23:54:06 UTC
\o/

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munnie_89 December 14 2009, 19:19:02 UTC
OMG that was so adorably cute >w< its so cute it tickles 0w0;
KEEp it UP <3<3

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whenyoufalldown December 14 2009, 23:59:51 UTC
Thanks :D

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pliash December 16 2009, 08:04:07 UTC
The outlook is dark, cold and bleak
Silly England; that's eight syllables ♥

This is outstanding
But I have forgone that ship
For a nice Dover

As Fate would have it,
Joker is ubiquitous
And will reign supreme.

(Well, those would work if I didn't break so many rules outside of the 5-7-5 syllable count.)

"Tis' the Season..."'s sentence structure is a little wonky in places, but absolutely adorable~ THE FIRST ONE JUST KILLED ME. IN A GOOD WAY.

I may not be big on USUK anymore, but it'll haunt me forever OTL Even when you're not into the pairing, the fandom's big enough to produce some amazing fanwork, making it unavoidable.

Needs more FrUK, damnit.

OH WELL. WASTE NOT, WANT NOT. BRILLIANT JOB EITHER WAY.


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whenyoufalldown December 16 2009, 08:32:17 UTC
YOU NEVER SAW THE 'IS'

Pfft, those were fine haikus! I only know enough to write half-decent ones anyway 8D

Haha, I wasn't expecting anyone to pick up on my mistakes damn now I want to go fix them. Ugh, I happen to hate reading anything I've written which sometimes makes me forgo proofreading :|

Sadly, FrUK is out of my writing range for now. France is too hard for England lol *shot* to write.

Thank you very much! ♥

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