23: fan fic { numb3rs } : "let that fever play (a waltz in triplets)" [coop/amita]

[neur0vanity]

title. let that fever play (a waltz in triplets)
author. nv
fandom. numb3rs
characters. billy cooper/amita ramanujan (don/coop, charlie/amita)
genre. drama/angst/experimental
rating. r
warnings. het, sexual content, language
word count. 836
challenge. "sunrise" for team angst (numb3rswriteoff)
spoilers. "man hunt"
summary. life after the brothers eppes.
feedback.

Comments

[ladygray99]

So sad. So Sweet.

[neur0vanity]

Poor Coop is supposed to be happy and snarky!

[spikedluv]

Oh, man, that's painfully beautiful. ♥

[neur0vanity]

Thank you so much! ♥

[used_songs]

I love the poetry of these. The description is amazing - I feel like I can almost walk into each scene.

[neur0vanity]

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked the description. :)

[delgaserasca]

The writing here is fabulous. Sincerely, NV, there is so much of this that is vivid and beautiful. All those details, like starts and stops like she’s driving a car for the first time, like she’s fucking for the first time and Coop could almost believe that it was winter outside, the real kind of winter that he’d seen in the Midwest during hunts, the kind of winter where there was snow on the ground, not this fake winter, this California winter. There are so many instances of duality, where so many things are going on at once, and I love that sense of disconnect that's so present all through this.
Really, a wonderful job.

[neur0vanity]

Thank you so much! I actually took a cue from you when it came to this piece. I love how you structure your fic and the way you add so much haunting description. :)

[irena_adler]

Lovely, m'dear. Pure poetry and achingly sad.

[neur0vanity]

Thank you. I wasn't sure that the sadness would come through, so it's great to hear you say that.