37: fan fic { numb3rs } : "crashing cars" [marshall, don/charlie]

[neur0vanity]

title. crashing cars
author. nv
fandom. numb3rs
characters. marshall penfield, don eppes/charlie eppes, (marshall/charlie)
rating. nc-17
genre. angst, romance
warnings. sexual situations, incest
spoilers. "convergence"
word count. 632
challenge. "convergence" for eppescest summer porn challenge
feedback. is the reason i do this.
disclaimer. the characters

Comments

[1trackmind]

Very nicely done. The last line was particularly lovely. I think you've written Penfield extremely well.

[neur0vanity]

Thank you!!

[emmademarais]

Interesting... That Penfield decides the suffering Charlie will go through never truly having what he wants is enough punishment is surprising. I'd have thought he'd use it to discredit him, but I guess this Penfield really did love him and wnat to hurt him more as a lover than as a mathematician. Nice...

[neur0vanity]

I have a hard time writing Penfield as a complete bastard because I like him. Or maybe it's just Colin Hanks that I like. :D

[little_dumpling]

ooo! that was great! penfield was so in character too! nicely done.

[neur0vanity]

Thanks so much!

[rubynye]

I like your Penfield. He's not a cardboard-cutout minor villain, he's a complicated guy.

[fractalmoon]

I just watched Convergence for the first time, and thought of the Charlie/Marshall potential. The Don/Charlie is a nice surprise!